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Untitled Give me title please. by ~kitty-chiariidaa:iconkitty-chiariidaa:



Watch the world pass me by,
as I stare, stary eyed.
All the dreams, I have planned,
Have a life span,
I have thigs to do, besides throw it all away.

I'll stand through my fears,
that have gathered into tears,
shed the pain of the years.
I know I can fly,
I just have to try,
and If I fall, I'll get up.

Broken wings and skinned knees, I'll live
I have a revoloution to start,
a revouloution with a heart.
Don't try and slow me down,
I ain't going down,
No, no, no.

I may be all alone,
this night may be so long,
but I know, the dawn will save me from my fears.

I'll stand through my fears,
shed the pain of the years.
I know I can fly,
I just have to try,
and If I fall, I'll just get up.

Can't give up,
can't give in,
this is where I start,
and if it ends, it'll end,
with me and my fading dreams,
but I know,
I got my revoloution started.
©2007-2009 ~kitty-chiariidaa
:iconkitty-chiariidaa:

Author's Comments

Don't ask. I'm just writing... It has no title. It sucks... it's about one of my charies actulley. Zena..... well.... whatev. Please give me a title! ^^

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:iconlockethehunter:
Starry Eyes works as a title, I think. Great poem.

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Well first off it's a great poem. Very nice writing. And for a title....it's just whatever ya want....a couple that came to my mind were ... "I'll Stand Tall" "My Revolution" or "I'll Make it Through"....just a few that I thought of when I read through it. Again though...very VERY nice poem.

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